The Lure continues.
I'm curious where everyone thinks the story might be going. This prologue/intro portion is dumping some relevant stuff for the backdrop and the setting, and hopefully where it leaves off will not be expected before I jump into the first actual plot arc. Oscar's encounter with the woman at the bar will resolve on page 5 and the following 10 pages after that will be the meat of the first story that I want to tell. But, I will be returning to these characters after that.